I only recently came across this wonderful article by Kurt Vonnegut, on how to write with style:
Why should you examine your writing style with the idea of improving it? Do so as a mark of respect for your readers, whatever you’re writing. If you scribble your thoughts any which way, your readers will surely feel that you care nothing about them. They will mark you down as an egomaniac or a chowderhead — or, worse, they will stop reading you.
The most damning revelation you can make about yourself is that you do not know what is interesting and what is not. Don’t you yourself like or dislike writers mainly for what they choose to show you or make you think about? Did you ever admire an emptyheaded writer for his or her mastery of the language? No.
So your own winning style must begin with ideas in your head.
And so he proceeds to provide beautiful sage advice about the steps you should take if your writing ever be taken seriously. At the end of the piece, he summarises the article with this pithy list:
- Find a subject you care about
- Do not ramble, though
- Keep it simple
- Have guts to cut
- Sound like yourself
- Say what you mean
- Pity the readers
I realised that far beyond writing, this captures a strategy so applicable to what we do day-to-day. You can think of this list as the seven things you need to consider when shipping ideas and new products with style. Let me explain how I think each are applicable:
Find a subject you care about
A while ago, I was invited by a small group of entrepreneurs to work on a new product whose scope and feasibility in the market was enormous. It was to be a product that would have sold itself, and fitted a niche that every other aged provider simply couldn’t fulfill, having been ravaged by the internet’s pace of change.
I was excited at first, mainly about the dollars. But after a week or two’s thinking and planning, there was a major hurdle: the industry sector that the product catered for didn’t interest me one iota. If I couldn’t muster even a morsal of enthusiasm for the industry, how could I engage with the product’s strategy, care about the design, and above all, respect about the end user.
So if you’re planning a new project, just make sure it’s topic is something you genuinely care about it.
Importantly here, Vonnegut says he is not urging his reader to write a novel, “A petition to the mayor about a pothole in front of your house or a love letter to the girl next door will do.” Think about projects as small or as large as your ambition: just make sure you care about it.
Do not ramble and Keep it simple
…William Shakespeare and James Joyce, wrote sentences which were almost childlike when their subjects were most profound. “To be or not to be?” asks Shakespeare’s Hamlet. The longest word is three letters long.
In our analogy, this is about scoping a project and maintaining focus. Just because you have access to, and can integrate with, an API for a newfangled service that doesn’t mean you have to, and similarly just because your users are likely to be signed up to every single social service under the sun, doesn’t mean you should ask them to include it in their user profile. It’s unlikely to be necessary, and is the form design equivalent of rambling.
Have the guts to cut
Even though you have spent hours on creating a killer feature of a new product, it doesn’t guarantee success.
I can’t count the number of times I have slaved away at a certain feature or gimmick that is simply ignored by the user. When something doesn’t work out, I quietly shelve it, and see the time spent on it as having been spent on learning something, not being wasted.
Sound like yourself
I myself find that I trust my own writing most, and others seem to trust it most, too, when I sound most like a person from Indianapolis, which is what I am.
A great example of this is the work of Cameron Koczon: the guy behind Brooklyn Beta, Teux Deux, and Gimmebar. Each of these things is imbued with his character and wit, and because I know him well I know precisely where he has influenced the copywriting, or some functional flourish.
I think this relates to the first point – if you talk about your ideas with others, with passion, the end result should sound (or feel) just as convincing. If you’re witty or frivolous, make your product witty or frivolous: don’t try to make it feel formal.
Say what you mean
Readers want our pages to look very much like pages they have seen before. Why? This is because they themselves have a tough job to do, and they need all the help they can get from us.
Be understandable so your product can be understood. Hold your user’s hand with direct messaging and communication. This is incredibly hard, especially when you have lived with an idea in your head for so long. I’m struggling with this right now with Fiftytwo: while the idea and rationale behind the service is so clear in my head, often it can become a little convoluted when I communicate its benefits. I need to try harder to elucidate the site’s concept more directly.
Pity the readers
This is one of my favourite parts of the article –
They have to identify thousands of little marks on paper, and make sense of them immediately.
Our users have to identify thousands of little pixels on screen, and make sense of them immediately.
At the end of the article, Vonnegut recommends reading The Elements of Style, by William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White as further reading. I’m wondering what our equivalent might be…